WARNING: This Flash Is Really Good!
"You know after reading that warning I was really scared to play the flash, but dude don't be so hard on yourself!"
No seriously, there wasn't a lot animated, but you managed to tell a story in an interesting way. You kept the story moving with little hints about what 'generic anime kid' was going to do and it wasn't boring. And some of the tweening wasn't noticeable because you didn't have tweened body parts, so keep that in mind next time.
Music was awesome. No 'PERFECT' lip-sync but NO that's not the focus of the flash... which was all about BRAWL, you even had a 'Buy Now' option at the end, nice touch.
You displayed a good skill in film making... by stretching some scenes (as shopkeeper hands out BRAWL and kid stretches hand) you added some tension which quickly turned into a joke with Steve's face appearing out of no where.
This and a million other reasons, including killing the character at the end makes me give you a 9/10! Shows how passion drives good work!