Awesome, cool!
As an animator, I have to say that, that was pretty good. Awesome art style and graphics in general... The characters look pretty cool, and looks like you took some time to animate it, therez loads of little frames (drawings) that most people'd not even bother drawing!
On the other hand, the story was interesting and it was the right length, the ending was OK... but I felt like something was missing, even tho that is not really a factor, cuz it was cool altogether!
Good job and I like the loadbar and simplicity in the the interactivity!